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High School AU
Sep. 6th, 2010 04:56 pmI finished the bulk of the next chapter of Metamorphoses yesterday. Today I was going to watch "In the Shadow of Z'Ha'Dum" as a refresher for the framing device I'm putting around that chapter. Instead, I wrote the first chapter of that high school AU I was telling you guys about.
Normally I sit on new writerings a day or two at least, so I can edit with slightly more objective eyes, but I am entirely too tickled with this; so please point out any typos, awkward bits, or plain bad patches of writing. And if you can think of a good overall title - you know, that isn't High School AU - let me know.
Title: The New Girl
Specs: Babylon 5, John/Delenn, AU, 3900 words
Rating: PG-13 for language.
Disclaimer: I borrowed the term "lectern" from Kim Stanley Robinson - it's the tiny, awesome computer of the future.
( "She was pretty. For a Minbari." )
Normally I sit on new writerings a day or two at least, so I can edit with slightly more objective eyes, but I am entirely too tickled with this; so please point out any typos, awkward bits, or plain bad patches of writing. And if you can think of a good overall title - you know, that isn't High School AU - let me know.
Title: The New Girl
Specs: Babylon 5, John/Delenn, AU, 3900 words
Rating: PG-13 for language.
Disclaimer: I borrowed the term "lectern" from Kim Stanley Robinson - it's the tiny, awesome computer of the future.
( "She was pretty. For a Minbari." )
