NaScreeWriMo - Day Sixty-Four
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kungfuwaynewhoINT. CASTLE - CORRIDORS - NIGHT
Drops of blood hit the floor in a steady rhythm. They fall from Mira’s arm - bitten, broken.
Her eyes dart from side to side as she wanders the maze of corridors, but the rooms she passes are empty, the doors hanging open or missing entirely. The castle now looks just like the east tower - abandoned and filthy.
Mira turns a corner, then stops. BREATHING from a room up ahead. She carefully and painfully reaches down to her shoe, but the dagger is gone. She forces herself to keep walking.
Mira looks through the open door. A FIGURE lies on the floor, breathing heavily and with difficulty. Mira freezes. The clouds move aside, allowing MOONLIGHT to stream in more strongly, illuminating the figure - Samuel.
Mira runs into--
THE ROOM
And drops to her knees beside him.
MIRA
Samuel. I’m here. It’s over, it’s all over.
His eyes roll up to look at her - HIS eyes, full of life again. But not for long. Mira sees the blood pooled beneath him, the GASHES in his throat.
SAMUEL
(labored)
Mira. I dreamed of you.
She cradles his head in her lap, pressing her skirt against his wounds.
MIRA
What happened? Who did this to you?
SAMUEL
He did. Long ago, before the dreams started.
Am I still dreaming?
He COUGHS, blood on his lips.
MIRA
No, darling. The dream is over. I’m going to take
you home.
SAMUEL
I’m sorry. I wasn’t...wasn’t a very good
husband to you.
MIRA
(shushes him)
You’re perfect. All I’ve ever wanted.
SAMUEL
...couldn’t...keep you safe...
MIRA
No, no.
(beat)
I’m the one who failed. I put you in danger,
you and Dominik both.
Samuel coughs again, and Mira wipes the blood off his mouth. His eyes are locked on her face. Then Mira senses something - she listens. SILENCE. Still...
Mira turns her head. Erzsebet stands behind her, looking down at Samuel. Bewilderment and sadness on her face. But she also sniffs the air, teeth slightly bared.
MIRA (CONT’D)
Help me. Please.
ERZSEBET
He is dead.
MIRA
No! You told me, you made that other one, you told me.
You can fix him. You can fix him! You have to, please!
Erzsebet seems to hear something. A moment looking back the way Mira came, as though she can see right through the walls. She leaves, quickly.
MIRA (CONT’D)
Don’t leave me! Beta! Beta!
Mira looks back at Samuel. His eyes still point her way, but they are still and unfocused. His labored breathing has stopped.
Mira sees that he is gone. A moment of shock, followed by one of disbelief, and then the grief takes her.
CUT TO:
INT. DINING HALL - NIGHT
Burnt and blackened. A few dying flames here and there. Bathory lies just where Mira left him. Empty eye sockets stare sightlessly at the ceiling.
A whimper. The WOLF lies on its side a few feet away, bleeding sluggishly from Mira’s stab wounds. It whimpers again as it moves its front paws, though it goes nowhere.
A determined growl, and the wolf rolls over onto its belly. Slowly, it struggles forward, dragging itself and leaving a broad red smear to mark its path. Louder whines and whimpers.
One final burst of energy as the wolf pulls itself up, standing. It staggers forward a few steps, and finally COLLAPSES on the Count’s chest. One long last exhalation, and the wolf’s eyes go dull.
Blood seeps from its wound. Soaks into the Count’s clothes. Puddles on his chest. Trickles down his face to his lips.
Skeletal fingers twitch.
CUT TO:
EXT. VILLAGE - NIGHT
The dark, quiet stillness is broken by the RINGING of the church bells. Lamps are lit, doors flung open. Families cluster outside, scared and curious.
INT. CHURCH - NIGHT
The MEN enter first, wincing at the loud, incessant bells. Women and children huddle in the doorway behind the men.
Everyone stares at DOMINIK, waiting patiently in the center of the aisle. He smiles at the men - they don’t appear any less worried.
The bells pause.
DOMINIK
They’re here!
Footsteps CLUMP down the stairs to the bell tower, just to the right of the men at the door. They back away, nervous - one crosses himself. But it is only ILKA, pleased.
LATER
Most everyone sits in the pews. Ilka and Todor, the butcher who wouldn’t take Mira’s eggs, face off, standing.
TODOR
What you propose is madness!
ILKA
Is this not madness? Living in constant fear, running from
every shadow - how can you say that is not madness?
Look at what he does to you!
Ilka points to the apse. Lying on a bier is the young woman the Count killed as Dominik watched. Ilka walks to her.
A crucifix has been placed in the corpse’s hands. Ragged wounds in her neck. Ilka pulls down the woman’s chin - a whole head of GARLIC has been stuffed into her mouth.
ILKA (CONT’D)
Tell me - why has this been done?
TODOR
You know why.
ILKA
You think this will stop him? Garlic and crosses? They mean
nothing to him. And he will continue to hunt you down,
murder you, drink your blood, change you into demons
too foul for even hell itself, and he will never stop!
Todor sits, no rebuttal. The women and children cry quietly or look stunned, in shock.
In the back, an OLD MAN stands. Frail, eyes cloudy and blind with cataracts, but his voice is still strong.
OLD MAN
When I was a child, my father and grandfather, and the
other men of the village, decided to overthrow the
Count. He would have been this Count’s grandfather, I suppose.
They prepared for weeks and weeks. I remember my Papa hiding
weapons in the barn. Everyone thought they were so clever. I remember
watching the men gather. At sunrise, of course.
The women and children and old men - but not all the old men,
some of them went, too - watched them head up the mountain.
I waited until Mama had stopped watching the road and
was talking with the other women, and then I ran up to
join the men. I brought a broom handle with me. I had
sharpened the end of it, hardened it in a fire. It was a
good weapon. I caught up with my father, and he was
proud to see my courage, but he sent me back to the
village. He told me to protect my mother and sisters. It
was good that he did. My father came home that night, but
he was not my father. He killed two of my sisters before
I drove my stake through his heart and cut off his head.
Beat. Murmurs, and then the villagers begin to shuffle out of the church.
ILKA
No. Please, you mustn’t go. You must help me.
TODOR
Girl, if you’re foolish enough to go back to that castle,
then there’s no help for you.
Ilka can only watch as the rest of them leave. She slumps down in the front pew, next to Dominik, who has dozed throughout the meeting.
ILKA
(whispers)
What should I do?
Dominik WAKES, terror on his face. He runs to the window - the castle silhouetted in front of the moon.
DOMINIK
(screams)
Mama! Mama!
Drops of blood hit the floor in a steady rhythm. They fall from Mira’s arm - bitten, broken.
Her eyes dart from side to side as she wanders the maze of corridors, but the rooms she passes are empty, the doors hanging open or missing entirely. The castle now looks just like the east tower - abandoned and filthy.
Mira turns a corner, then stops. BREATHING from a room up ahead. She carefully and painfully reaches down to her shoe, but the dagger is gone. She forces herself to keep walking.
Mira looks through the open door. A FIGURE lies on the floor, breathing heavily and with difficulty. Mira freezes. The clouds move aside, allowing MOONLIGHT to stream in more strongly, illuminating the figure - Samuel.
Mira runs into--
THE ROOM
And drops to her knees beside him.
MIRA
Samuel. I’m here. It’s over, it’s all over.
SAMUEL
(labored)
Mira. I dreamed of you.
MIRA
What happened? Who did this to you?
SAMUEL
He did. Long ago, before the dreams started.
Am I still dreaming?
MIRA
No, darling. The dream is over. I’m going to take
you home.
SAMUEL
I’m sorry. I wasn’t...wasn’t a very good
husband to you.
MIRA
(shushes him)
You’re perfect. All I’ve ever wanted.
SAMUEL
...couldn’t...keep you safe...
MIRA
No, no.
(beat)
I’m the one who failed. I put you in danger,
you and Dominik both.
Mira turns her head. Erzsebet stands behind her, looking down at Samuel. Bewilderment and sadness on her face. But she also sniffs the air, teeth slightly bared.
MIRA (CONT’D)
Help me. Please.
ERZSEBET
He is dead.
MIRA
No! You told me, you made that other one, you told me.
You can fix him. You can fix him! You have to, please!
MIRA (CONT’D)
Don’t leave me! Beta! Beta!
Mira sees that he is gone. A moment of shock, followed by one of disbelief, and then the grief takes her.
CUT TO:
INT. DINING HALL - NIGHT
Burnt and blackened. A few dying flames here and there. Bathory lies just where Mira left him. Empty eye sockets stare sightlessly at the ceiling.
A whimper. The WOLF lies on its side a few feet away, bleeding sluggishly from Mira’s stab wounds. It whimpers again as it moves its front paws, though it goes nowhere.
A determined growl, and the wolf rolls over onto its belly. Slowly, it struggles forward, dragging itself and leaving a broad red smear to mark its path. Louder whines and whimpers.
One final burst of energy as the wolf pulls itself up, standing. It staggers forward a few steps, and finally COLLAPSES on the Count’s chest. One long last exhalation, and the wolf’s eyes go dull.
Blood seeps from its wound. Soaks into the Count’s clothes. Puddles on his chest. Trickles down his face to his lips.
Skeletal fingers twitch.
CUT TO:
The dark, quiet stillness is broken by the RINGING of the church bells. Lamps are lit, doors flung open. Families cluster outside, scared and curious.
INT. CHURCH - NIGHT
The MEN enter first, wincing at the loud, incessant bells. Women and children huddle in the doorway behind the men.
Everyone stares at DOMINIK, waiting patiently in the center of the aisle. He smiles at the men - they don’t appear any less worried.
The bells pause.
DOMINIK
They’re here!
LATER
Most everyone sits in the pews. Ilka and Todor, the butcher who wouldn’t take Mira’s eggs, face off, standing.
TODOR
What you propose is madness!
ILKA
Is this not madness? Living in constant fear, running from
every shadow - how can you say that is not madness?
Look at what he does to you!
A crucifix has been placed in the corpse’s hands. Ragged wounds in her neck. Ilka pulls down the woman’s chin - a whole head of GARLIC has been stuffed into her mouth.
ILKA (CONT’D)
Tell me - why has this been done?
TODOR
You know why.
ILKA
You think this will stop him? Garlic and crosses? They mean
nothing to him. And he will continue to hunt you down,
murder you, drink your blood, change you into demons
too foul for even hell itself, and he will never stop!
In the back, an OLD MAN stands. Frail, eyes cloudy and blind with cataracts, but his voice is still strong.
OLD MAN
When I was a child, my father and grandfather, and the
other men of the village, decided to overthrow the
Count. He would have been this Count’s grandfather, I suppose.
They prepared for weeks and weeks. I remember my Papa hiding
weapons in the barn. Everyone thought they were so clever. I remember
watching the men gather. At sunrise, of course.
The women and children and old men - but not all the old men,
some of them went, too - watched them head up the mountain.
I waited until Mama had stopped watching the road and
was talking with the other women, and then I ran up to
join the men. I brought a broom handle with me. I had
sharpened the end of it, hardened it in a fire. It was a
good weapon. I caught up with my father, and he was
proud to see my courage, but he sent me back to the
village. He told me to protect my mother and sisters. It
was good that he did. My father came home that night, but
he was not my father. He killed two of my sisters before
I drove my stake through his heart and cut off his head.
ILKA
No. Please, you mustn’t go. You must help me.
TODOR
Girl, if you’re foolish enough to go back to that castle,
then there’s no help for you.
ILKA
(whispers)
What should I do?
DOMINIK
(screams)
Mama! Mama!
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Date: 2011-01-04 10:17 pm (UTC)Well... maybe since you put it that way...
still
:(
(I am feeling like I did a good job, that you and Holly are both sad about it.)
As well you should! I think I mentioned this previously (but am too lazy to go back and look for it) - you made me care about what happens to these characters. That's great.