Date: 2011-05-15 11:39 am (UTC)
Oh, I loved this story. Your characterisations were spot on - even the subtlest differences between Tron and Alan.
Great how not everything turned out fine and dandy between Flynn and Alan - so in a way Flynn/Tron became awkwardly unreal. I felt sorry for poor naive Tron, bold, shunned and then later guilty Flynn and in the end even Alan who had been so human in his actions and must have regretted them so deeply. Amazing how you brought so much complexity across in such a concise story. (and the sexy-time was hot and well-written, too, btw!)

cheers

napra
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