Aw, thank you so much! It's been awhile since I've been seized by such a strong "omg otpppppp" feeling (and four months after Legacy, IDGI); normally I would not be cranking it out like this. So I'm glad that the story held together and everything.
Quorra is a sweetheart - it's a fine line in writing her. On the one hand, you want her to be innocent and sweet and enthusiastic, but on the other you don't want Alan to come across as a pedophile, LOL. So that bit was a liiiiiitle meta.
Thank you again for the review - I'm still surprised that anyone else is reading!
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Date: 2011-04-25 12:40 pm (UTC)Quorra is a sweetheart - it's a fine line in writing her. On the one hand, you want her to be innocent and sweet and enthusiastic, but on the other you don't want Alan to come across as a pedophile, LOL. So that bit was a liiiiiitle meta.
Thank you again for the review - I'm still surprised that anyone else is reading!