I love this plot twist. I liked it in the first draft, and somehow I like it even better now. Not that much has changed about it, so I'm not sure why - maybe because the rest of the story leading up to this point was more dramatic and clear this time? Anyway. Very nice.
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branchandroot
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Date: 2011-04-14 01:29 pm (UTC)