I'm sort of wondering about Mira preparing for an attack before Janos tells her that fire is the only way to destroy the Count - particularly where she makes sure she has lamp oil. Does she know about the fire thing already, and Janos just doesn't know that she knows?
Argh. See what I said about sequencing. I'm glad you caught this, though - I pondered how to fix it, and decided it was a lot simpler to just cut the whole preparation/montage scene, and have Janos give her the oil. I'm going to end up not really using the ad hoc charm anyway, I think, and this saves half a page - and I'm going to need all of those I can get. So good call, man.
You'd think it would be faster, cutting and pasting in earlier stuff, but no. No, it is not.
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Date: 2011-04-10 07:36 pm (UTC)Argh. See what I said about sequencing. I'm glad you caught this, though - I pondered how to fix it, and decided it was a lot simpler to just cut the whole preparation/montage scene, and have Janos give her the oil. I'm going to end up not really using the ad hoc charm anyway, I think, and this saves half a page - and I'm going to need all of those I can get. So good call, man.
You'd think it would be faster, cutting and pasting in earlier stuff, but no. No, it is not.