Call me crazy, but what if you took any and all references to "vampire" out of the title? One of the things I really like about the script is that it does not scream THIS IS A VAMPIRE STORY at the top of its lungs, and it would be good to see that come through in the title as well.
I keep going back to the Bathory legend and wondering if you can use something in there. Erzebet was known as the Blood Countess... maybe something with "blood" in it?
I also think, given what we learn about Janos down the road and the way he's coming off as more hardcore religious in this draft, that some sort of veiled biblical reference would work.
That is a lot of ideas but no outright suggestions. Sorry :( I will keep thinking on it, though!
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Date: 2011-04-01 03:45 pm (UTC)I keep going back to the Bathory legend and wondering if you can use something in there. Erzebet was known as the Blood Countess... maybe something with "blood" in it?
I also think, given what we learn about Janos down the road and the way he's coming off as more hardcore religious in this draft, that some sort of veiled biblical reference would work.
That is a lot of ideas but no outright suggestions. Sorry :( I will keep thinking on it, though!