I am going to hush you in your own journal. That's right. Hush. The title is fine. I think as a finished piece, it will be better, and even intriguing, because the reader will be like... an end, OK, but I can see there's more to the story... and it will work on a different level than it does when you're posting it as a WIP.
Does that make sense?
However, you now have me singing "it's the end of the world as we know it, and I feel fiiiiiiine"... so thank you very much for that :P
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Date: 2011-02-22 12:46 am (UTC)Does that make sense?
However, you now have me singing "it's the end of the world as we know it, and I feel fiiiiiiine"... so thank you very much for that :P