I was really only worried about naming him because I wasn't sure if it was confusing to read a descriptor instead of a name. He won't ever be referred to by name by a character, or speak himself. If it's not confusing and it's clear to which character I'm referring, then I'm not worried about it.
Why Janos didn't ask Ilka goes back to Janos' overall motivations, which will be coming out relatively soon.
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Date: 2010-11-16 06:16 pm (UTC)Why Janos didn't ask Ilka goes back to Janos' overall motivations, which will be coming out relatively soon.