Date: 2010-11-16 02:26 pm (UTC)
Wow. A lot of good stuff happening here. I'm really curious to know why Janos didn't ask Ilka to kill the count. Is there something special about Mira that Ilka lacks? Does Erzsebet have something to do with it?

And that last line is fabulous.

As for naming him - IDK, maybe. It hasn't seemed necessary until this point. I think it depends on what happens with him next. Is he central to the rest of the plot, or just a clue?

I also think the only reason to name him is if his name is going to be spoken by someone. Otherwise it doesn't seem important.
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