I bet you had no idea when you started this that you'd end up writing a story about politics, racism and immigration, huh?
Um, yeah. After the last chapter, when I decided to go back and put in the links to the next chapter at the end of each previous one, I ran across the initial post where I polled everyone on whether I should write this. And it was like, "adorable teenage kissytimes yay!" Oh, past Shannon. You had no idea.
I do find it a little (just a little) hard to buy it that the principal of the school would defer to John's judgment...
Yeah, you're right. Reading back through it, it's too much. Maybe if he suggested they all meet back tomorrow, then looked to John for approval? I think that would get the point across without making the principal completely useless. And this is why I like to post things here first!
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Date: 2010-10-29 07:40 pm (UTC)Um, yeah. After the last chapter, when I decided to go back and put in the links to the next chapter at the end of each previous one, I ran across the initial post where I polled everyone on whether I should write this. And it was like, "adorable teenage kissytimes yay!" Oh, past Shannon. You had no idea.
I do find it a little (just a little) hard to buy it that the principal of the school would defer to John's judgment...
Yeah, you're right. Reading back through it, it's too much. Maybe if he suggested they all meet back tomorrow, then looked to John for approval? I think that would get the point across without making the principal completely useless. And this is why I like to post things here first!