Screenwriting Contest
Dec. 21st, 2011 11:12 amHey, folks. I'm entering a screenwriting contest, which I've mentioned a few times before. Instead of writing a full screenplay, we were given a logline and have to write the first fifteen pages of a movie based on that. I know it's, like, the busiest time of the year, but if even one person has a few minutes to give this a look and give me some hard, unvarnished criticism, I would seriously appreciate it. I'll repay you with a fic, some icons, a wallpaper, or something else.
The logline: "A father and son find themselves trapped in the Bermuda Triangle after embarking on a quest to discover what happened to the father’s missing parents."
( First fifteen pages under the cut. )
The logline: "A father and son find themselves trapped in the Bermuda Triangle after embarking on a quest to discover what happened to the father’s missing parents."
( First fifteen pages under the cut. )