Dec. 21st, 2011

kungfuwaynewho: (wait more things)
Hey, folks.  I'm entering a screenwriting contest, which I've mentioned a few times before.  Instead of writing a full screenplay, we were given a logline and have to write the first fifteen pages of a movie based on that.  I know it's, like, the busiest time of the year, but if even one person has a few minutes to give this a look and give me some hard, unvarnished criticism, I would seriously appreciate it.  I'll repay you with a fic, some icons, a wallpaper, or something else.

The logline: "A father and son find themselves trapped in the Bermuda Triangle after embarking on a quest to discover what happened to the father’s missing parents."


First fifteen pages under the cut. )

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