Now she was the one making fun of him; she had to be. What did that even mean? I totally wonder this same thing. WTF?
This is cute; you do a great job of keeping John and Delenn's personalities in check but also painting a realistic "high school" picture. I like that John is already planning for the Academy and Delenn wants to be a diplomat. And I love all the little details, like the singing and how John eats his donut; they make it more believable. All around, a great start.
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Date: 2010-09-07 03:16 am (UTC)This is cute; you do a great job of keeping John and Delenn's personalities in check but also painting a realistic "high school" picture. I like that John is already planning for the Academy and Delenn wants to be a diplomat. And I love all the little details, like the singing and how John eats his donut; they make it more believable. All around, a great start.