Oh no...oh no oh no oh no. But yes. The sensuality of this fic was incredible. I think this is the first John/Delenn fic I've found where I was riveted. The erotic parts were incredibly well written, but also the emotion throughout, the palpable weight of their choices. The story was elegant but somehow emotionally heavy and oppressive, and sharp without how you could feel their love for each other. I don't think I've ever shipped these two as much as I did here. The last part was chilling, the price for Sheridan's remaining years? What else was paid? So many questions, even if the story itself is perfect as it is. -Avelera
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Date: 2013-08-08 12:49 am (UTC)The sensuality of this fic was incredible. I think this is the first John/Delenn fic I've found where I was riveted. The erotic parts were incredibly well written, but also the emotion throughout, the palpable weight of their choices. The story was elegant but somehow emotionally heavy and oppressive, and sharp without how you could feel their love for each other. I don't think I've ever shipped these two as much as I did here. The last part was chilling, the price for Sheridan's remaining years? What else was paid? So many questions, even if the story itself is perfect as it is.
-Avelera