You're probably bored with me saying the same thing on every story you write, but I totally love this!
Even though John is the victim here, I find myself actually feeling the most sympathy for Delenn. She tries so hard to make him happy, but the one thing that will, she can't give him. I must admit to laughing when she was looking up hand job and I loved the fact that she even fulfilled that request!
I have the feeling that (assuming you write more) the fact that she lied about Anna is going to turn out badly in this universe as well!
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Even though John is the victim here, I find myself actually feeling the most sympathy for Delenn. She tries so hard to make him happy, but the one thing that will, she can't give him. I must admit to laughing when she was looking up hand job and I loved the fact that she even fulfilled that request!
I have the feeling that (assuming you write more) the fact that she lied about Anna is going to turn out badly in this universe as well!