EEEEEE! I love the details in this. And I love that you've introduced a potential baddie in Junior. And I love... Alan and Quorra. You write them so believably - Alan has valid concerns, so does she, and really, it's not just them. This is a THING people in relationships actually do struggle with sometimes, and sometimes the relationship doesn't survive it. And the spooky end and... yay... yay.

As usual I have ~ideas about where this is going, but Im'ma just shut off my brain and sit back and let you tell the story. :)