http://nhpw.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] nhpw.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] kungfuwaynewho 2011-04-14 05:40 pm (UTC)

I like that Samuel has a lot more character development in this draft.

(This sounds familiar. I think maybe I said it already? Or maybe I'm having deja vu, IDK.)

ANYWAY, I like that he has more character development, and that you get more of a feel for his and Mira's relationship.

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