Hi! Late comment is late, sorry. Poor Leone :( But I think the scene with Dominik channeling the Count was a lot more powerful this time, knowing the identity of his victim.

I'm sort of wondering about Mira preparing for an attack before Janos tells her that fire is the only way to destroy the Count - particularly where she makes sure she has lamp oil. Does she know about the fire thing already, and Janos just doesn't know that she knows?

Good continuation, and I like the way the bits from the first draft are weaving back in!