http://kungfuwaynewho.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] kungfuwaynewho.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] kungfuwaynewho 2011-04-04 09:08 pm (UTC)

Yes - I wanted some emotional stuff in this sequence before we get to the more action/plot-driven third act. That's one of the big notes I came away with from the first draft - that it got a little hectic and intense and hard to follow, so I wanted to slow things down a bit.

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