http://kungfuwaynewho.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] kungfuwaynewho.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] kungfuwaynewho 2011-03-20 04:53 pm (UTC)

I had a hard time writing the dress thing. The idea was that when the blank-faced manservant took her to the room, he pulled the dress out and showed it to her like, please put this on. I need that to come across without any dialogue, because the vamp servants never speak. I'll take another pass at that, because it shouldn't be like, oh, she just has made this place her own!

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