http://singer-shaper.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] singer-shaper.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] kungfuwaynewho 2011-03-18 03:19 am (UTC)

I must be sleepy, too, 'cuz I don't see any errors.

I really like the Bathory mythos, and that all the paintings look like him. Knowing what he is makes them all the more creepy.

I also like that Dominik is intuitively afraid of the castle - smart kid.

Keep up the great work!

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