http://singer-shaper.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] singer-shaper.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] kungfuwaynewho 2011-03-14 02:29 am (UTC)

I'm liking Mira's assertiveness here - I seem to remember her being a bit more timid in the first draft. And Samuel seems a bit braver as well. Looking forward to the next part!
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