http://nhpw.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] nhpw.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] kungfuwaynewho 2011-02-11 02:19 pm (UTC)

Part the First:

Oh John... you try so hard! Adorable. And, you know, I love the way you write Sheridan - less "rah rah I am awesome at military stuffs and am SUPER SERIAL because I only have 20 years to live" and more typical-human-man. Stuff like this just makes me giggle:

“Yedor,” he guessed, though he stated his answer with absolute authority. Delenn looked at him for a beat, and then she slipped on her shoes and left their quarters without another word. A minute after she was gone, he distantly remembered her talking about the new ISA installation a week or two ago, and that they were hoping to build it in Tinarel. He was glad that his vice-president was such an understanding lady (when she wasn’t eight months pregnant, that is), and didn’t continually remind him of just how dumb he was.

because of how real-life it is. Every married couple has moments like that, I think.

I also love how tickled he is about his impending fatherhood. YAY Baby Sheridan!


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