K, you know how you were thinking this is too long? I wonder if maybe this whole bit with Samuel coming back isn't necessary. Or, if you want it there, maybe skip the original killing and just have him show up and have her think for a few moments he's normal? Although then it would almost seem like you were jerking the audience around if she really had every reason to think he was ok and then oops, no. IDK. It is getting a bit long and convoluted. Like maybe there should be just one main climax, or maybe one climax with one other-shoe-dropping climax?