Hee! I suppose it doesn't make any difference that I'd always planned to kill Samuel? And that if it isn't him, it's Dominik?
I'm going to go back and make Mira go to the castle on her own, and like...there should be consequences from her act of hubris. And also that for the climax to play, I think there has to have been a Major Death - I don't know if it will resonate if everyone manages to escape.
Of course, if we get to the end and you say, "No, he didn't need to die, this was balls," I will evaluate it. I'm not married to it or anything.
(I am feeling like I did a good job, that you and Holly are both sad about it.)
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I'm going to go back and make Mira go to the castle on her own, and like...there should be consequences from her act of hubris. And also that for the climax to play, I think there has to have been a Major Death - I don't know if it will resonate if everyone manages to escape.
Of course, if we get to the end and you say, "No, he didn't need to die, this was balls," I will evaluate it. I'm not married to it or anything.
(I am feeling like I did a good job, that you and Holly are both sad about it.)