Question about the fire in the library. Did you intend for there to be a big fire for Ilka and Dominik, and then when Bathory enters there is no more fire? I think that confused me just a little.
Also, I did a little digging. I know Janos is a name from the story of Elizabeth Bathory; did you just use the name? Or is there a direct tie between Janos in legend and Janos in this story?
No, Mira, there is only one answer. The Count must be destroyed. And you must destroy him.
I like this. It's a very basic statement, no frills, no riddles, and I think it's necessary. It lays it right out for your viewer.
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Also, I did a little digging. I know Janos is a name from the story of Elizabeth Bathory; did you just use the name? Or is there a direct tie between Janos in legend and Janos in this story?
No, Mira, there is only one answer. The Count
must be destroyed. And you must destroy him.
I like this. It's a very basic statement, no frills, no riddles, and I think it's necessary. It lays it right out for your viewer.