OH MAN, I am going to love this! This kind of thing is like a guilty pleasure to me. I, too, am completely tickled by it.
I'm honestly amazed that (1) you have kept these two completely in character, only as teenagers, (2) you have made me like teenage John Sheridan despite the fact that he is a teenage boy (ugh!), and (3) the early relationship you have created here reminds me very much of the early relationship in Season 2. In short, great job! I am excited for more.
I think this is my favorite line: John grinned, the kind of grin he couldn't help and not the kind of grin he used as a weapon, and left. That grin on an adult John slays me, so I can only imagine how adorable it is on teenage John.
Also, randomly, I love that Mrs. Chu = Mrs. Shrew.
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I'm honestly amazed that (1) you have kept these two completely in character, only as teenagers, (2) you have made me like teenage John Sheridan despite the fact that he is a teenage boy (ugh!), and (3) the early relationship you have created here reminds me very much of the early relationship in Season 2. In short, great job! I am excited for more.
I think this is my favorite line: John grinned, the kind of grin he couldn't help and not the kind of grin he used as a weapon, and left. That grin on an adult John slays me, so I can only imagine how adorable it is on teenage John.
Also, randomly, I love that Mrs. Chu = Mrs. Shrew.