ext_2387 ([identity profile] vjs2259.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] kungfuwaynewho 2013-08-03 10:22 pm (UTC)

That was an excellent read. Shivers up and down my spine half a dozen times. Evocative and stunning and a little scary. I loved the change in viewpoints and the description of what's wrong about Anna.


an endearment of some kind, she guessed, though predictably, since it was a human endearment, it referred to food.

That made me laugh out loud.

Thumbs up.

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